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Conjugal Visits
Author: Rich Humus
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(Added on May 31, 2003)
(This month 16756 readers) (Total 41813 readers) |
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Man convicted and sent to prison. The evil warden dreams up a particularly nasty way for him, or rather, his wife, to work off his term.... |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
johnnytoobad
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Jun 8, 2003 |
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Excellent idea and well written. I think the telling of the story as the man is great. Would be nice though to see / know whatever the womans feelings.
Who cares whether the warden gets away with it! (8/10)
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Curtis
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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I'm a little conflicted here. It's not a very realistic story (how does the warden expect to get away with it? The wife enjoys it?). I'd've prefered it if the wife had come to the Warden with the idea of getting time off her husband's sentence, then the two mentioned problems vanish (and the husband wouldn't have to know she was volunteering!). There are a couple of mis-spellings of the 'wrong word' type, but not too bad, and the prose gets a little over-blown a couple of times but, again, not badly. This story DOES have some heat and I'm certainly coming back to read the later chapters. I didn't have Moggy's problem with who was doing the narration, in fact I thought that was a different -- and good -- touch. I hope I'll be able to bump this up a point in a couple of weeks. (6/10)
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Moggy
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Jun 3, 2003 |
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It's not a bad idea for a story and is generally well written. I would have liked more eroticism in the wife's rape, if that's not a contradiction in terms.
Writing in the first person voice of a man in prison doesn't seem ideal for this plot. (6/10)
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