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Tamika's Descent
Author: femmeslave
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(Added on May 25, 2003)
(This month 56920 readers) (Total 79189 readers) |
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Tamika instantly hated Beth from the moment they met, and now she found herself having to work with her...... could things get any worse. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
semperfi57
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Jan 22, 2011 |
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Since I'm into racial dom/sub I'm somewhat biased..but this story drew me in and makes me sad there are only 3 of her stories available. The mental/psychological aspects are what excites me (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 24, 2004 |
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good read but average (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Jun 19, 2003 |
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I think I read the same story as Curtis. The writing style not bad but with room for improvement. It's pleasant enough story, with characterization that is missing from so many stories here. I would have liked the author to try making it hotter. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 3, 2003 |
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Maybe I read a different story. The one I read had poor grammer. mis-spellings, run-on sentences and missing punctuation. It WAS relatively realistic, but not in the least hot. The second chapter added nothing, being just a rehash of the first. (3/10)
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don11
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May 26, 2003 |
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Again concise and well written.
Better because there is more characterisation ... no enough as yet. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 25, 2003 |
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This is an exciting short story with a nice build-up to the action scenes. It is mercifully free from many of the complete implausibles that can detract from this kind of story, so it seems pretty true-to-life. Despite a few grammar and spelling slips, this is a most enjoyable read. Looking forward to the sequel. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
semperfi57
(Edit) (Jan 22, 2011)
- I agree wholeheartedly. I also wonder if there's some true to life in this story. I wonder if female and black?
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