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If You Were My Bride
Author: JB
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(Added on May 25, 2003)
(This month 14618 readers) (Total 33517 readers) |
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The follow-up story to "The Wedding", a published story by author. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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Excellent writing, but the story unfortunately goes nowhere. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
cbkjjk
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Dec 28, 2003 |
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Story hangs together very well. Would like to have more description of the corsetting process itself. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Aug 3, 2003 |
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Outstanding in every regard. The perfect combination of erotic bondage and submissive display. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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May 30, 2003 |
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I liked the suspense. Hope this analysis of mine draws your weighted average up. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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May 25, 2003 |
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Not as polished as The Wedding but an enjoyable read. Deducted a point because it was too damn short! (7/10)
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