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Spoiled Black Bitch
Author: femmeslave
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(Added on May 25, 2003)
(This month 53437 readers) (Total 72145 readers) |
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A pampered and spoiled black girl is upset when her mother's new friend moves in. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Aug 3, 2004 |
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Wonder if the writer will ever add anything to the story. (7/10)
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Hornyreddevil
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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well the only thing i can say is "will there be another one?" like ladys maid said it moves at a nice pace but some parts are just way too fast (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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May 26, 2003 |
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Clear and well written.
Sparce on character but I'll read more by you .... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 25, 2003 |
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I really rather enjoyed this story, despite some poor grammar and spelling. The storyline is realistic, erotic and events move on at a fast pace (too fast in parts - it would have been nice to get a little more detail). All the same, it appears to be the first episode of a continuing story, so hopefully we will get deeper into the details later. Nice start, but maybe a proof-read before the next chapter is posted? (6/10)
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