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Housewife's Awakening
Author: WF Writer
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(Added on May 22, 2003)
(This month 148534 readers) (Total 279090 readers) |
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Debbie could hardly contain her excitement. Her nieces were arriving that afternoon. Stephanie was 19; Amber 18 and Debbie always enjoyed their visits. Both girls loved to shop and go out dancing at night. They provided a small diversion in Debbie's otherwise mundane life. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
5909981
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Jun 6, 2011 |
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good one but on next chapters make it more nasty
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mike668
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Sep 20, 2006 |
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like to see what is going to happen plese contenu the story . (10/10)
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oldwino
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Nov 3, 2005 |
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the content gives this a ten. Great blackmail story. Has a really great twist that we don't want to give away. This story made my too young gf(38). I know I'm a ped, cum in my lap reading it to me chapter by chapter. She loved the mall, shopping trips , paperboy and strip club scenes. She hopes to read more tales of puplic exhibition and forced sex. She would have preffered the nices to be two to four young teens boys. We hope to read more extreme chapters. We are new to this site and usually only rate stories when we reach the last chapter available. We treat them like the old saturday morning serials at the movies when I was young. We usualy read one or two chapters of several stories each session. (10/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 23, 2005 |
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A wild ride. Humiliation aspect quite good, but, whereas most stories in this field are underwritten, this I felt was overwritten in parts -- too much detail and a repetive sameness within scenes (particularly the photo shoot and the threesome scene). The change of characters' voices and tense in the last two chapters was stylistically distracting. Quite imaginative, but could have used a blue pencil by maybe a third. But basically, good erotica. Thanks. (8/10)
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ykzterg
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Jun 14, 2004 |
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highly erotic (9/10)
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sugeneg
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Apr 25, 2004 |
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A nice beginning but the story, and the writing, seems to have become more and more fractured with each subsequent chapter. Editing would help but I believe the author needs to get back to the core of the story - the humiliation and training of Debbie. Maybe a F/m code should also be added as there seems to be a lot of that creeping into the story. (6/10)
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djc_sd
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Feb 22, 2004 |
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Love the aspect of blackmailing a woman who doesn't want to submit, doesn't want the exhibitionism but but because of circumstances knows she is getting in deeper and deeper. I like the later chapers as they keep pushing Debbie past previous limits. (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Very enjoyable story. Some editing is needed, but the content is very good. We're anxiously awaiting the next part. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 1, 2003 |
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Good, keep ot up (9/10)
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Master_c
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Jul 28, 2003 |
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This is a great story, however, the author needs to edit or have another edit it for spelling, etc. I have enjoyed all parts of the story and would like to see more chapters added. Do the girls get hubby? Does ebbie get The thousand dollars required? How much more do her neices do with her? I would reccommend it to anyone.
Charles (8/10)
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tttttt
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Jul 26, 2003 |
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good....but wish for debbie to get over it.and the nieces punished! (7/10)
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Curtis
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Jul 11, 2003 |
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Chapter four is the best since the first. I've been waiting for Debbie to wise up and realize that her nieces really have no hold over her. Too bad I'm going to miss chapter five. (7/10)
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Emily
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Jul 9, 2003 |
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The humiliation levels in this story are really exciting. I can't wait to read more! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Klauss
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Jun 13, 2003 |
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The start and the 2 part were great. (9/10)
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don11
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Jun 2, 2003 |
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Debbie is okay but we need more information on the other two - indidually and together.
What makes them tick etc? (6/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 25, 2003 |
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This is definitely a hot story but the bdsm aspects barely get past some dirty talk and a little moderate spanking. It has some really nice lesbian action and I found the whole thing very appealing but, if there is to be a part 2, I would like to see some more bdsm content. (7/10)
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