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Brother's Teenage Sex-Slave
Author: Cerberus
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(Added on May 22, 2003)
(This month 197254 readers) (Total 330921 readers) |
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When fourteen year-old Molly¡¯s millionaire parents die in a plane crash she is left in the care of her sadistic older brother who turns her into a sex-slave. |
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god
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Aug 22, 2011 |
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scew the book you should make this a movie lol (10/10)
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pollycoventry
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SUPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (10/10)
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badcatholicgirl
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Oct 5, 2006 |
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i think its one of the hotter stories on this site, esp and last chapter, wish you would continue, quite nasty, its one of the stories that i read over again (9/10)
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lil emily
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May 25, 2005 |
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i like it. email me and we could 1 on 1 sometime, babe. (9/10)
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MasterRJ
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Jul 2, 2004 |
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I have always enjoyed your work Cerberus, and this is by far my favorite. Nothing makes you cry out for this poor kid then being a prisoner of her own brother, in her own home, having no control on her body. I love the way you did this. I do however agree with the others. You gotta bring down Wayne. He's the physical embodiement of everything everybody hates, and the girl is the physical embodiement of love and purity and innocence. These other people may not like it, but I deffinately enjoy reading your work. Maybe we could co-op at some point. I've wanted to put a story up for some time, but I'm nervous about doing such a thing with no guidance. (more afraid I'll run out of inspiration) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lil emily
(Edit) (May 25, 2005)
- hey RJ. It's me midnitedawn from island life. thanks for getting me into this, i realy enjoy it!
- Replied by:
MasterRJ
(Edit) (May 25, 2005)
- Guilty as charged...I spread the word.
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pussy
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Jan 4, 2004 |
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I like the way u use different object to create pain.I foun of ur stories because i like incest and small girls unshment stories.Use more small girls like 8 or 10 years old in ur stories (9/10)
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Amber
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Jul 8, 2003 |
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Loved the story. can't wait until it's updated again! (9/10)
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Nitrofox
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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This is a good story, but this is a pretty decent story as far as humiliation goes, albeit ridiculoulsly unbleivable. Mind Control drugs don't exist. How could they? We don't know nearly enough about the human mind to do this. Also, I don't understand how you can claim a will is a forgery, but that's beside the point. THere were several spelling errors, most noticably "four" instead of "for". (6/10)
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danr
(Edit) (Jul 2, 2003)
- The inclusion of MC drugs was a bit of poetic licence on my part. (I don't think that R.L. Stevenson believed that the drug which changed Dr Jekyll into Mr Hyde actually existed when he wrote that story.)
Regarding the spelling errors -- I did a quick scan and found no examples of misusing "four" instead of "for".
Thanks for your feedback
danr AKA Cerberus
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lex ludite
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Jul 2, 2003 |
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It is difficult, in the extreme, to believe that this is the same person who wrote Innocence Betrayed. This one sounds as if it was written by a teenager who had slept through English 101. What is this strange tense that the author is using? I am totally disappointed and completely confused by this feeble effort, and have no intention of wasting any more of my time on this mess. (3/10)
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Hornyreddevil
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Jun 7, 2003 |
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it seems to just drag on. i hope the next installment gives it some personality, which i hope shows up some time soon!!! (4/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 26, 2003 |
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This is the first part of a continuing story, so it is a little early to judge but I was disappointed that, initially, there was some decent build-up and characterization up to the point where the parents died. However, from there, things moved way too fast, as BDSM Tourguide rightly points out. The whole premise of an 18yo boy being left in sole charge of his sister and a $100m dollar fortune is also rather far-fetched. The story so far has not really engaged my interest - hopefully there will be an upturn coming soon. (3/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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May 24, 2003 |
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What a freakin' psycho! Wayne needs to be commited to an institution, not be placed in charge of taking care of his sister. His parents are dead and all he can think about is getting his sister in the sack and having his way with her? Does he have absolutely no heart? I'll give the author kudos for making the teen boy a mark of how bad civilization has fallen into apathy in today's day and age. However, the story didn't motivate me to read further, did not turn me on and did not seem to have a tremendous plot. If there are more chapters forthcoming, I hope the author improves them a bit. (4/10)
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bdsmbill
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May 23, 2003 |
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I am prejudiced a bit. I don't prefer stories where the nice people are just there to be victims. Hopefully, as this continues, the brother will get what he deserves. (6/10)
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