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Julie's Night
Author: Joe K
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(Added on May 14, 2003)
(This month 52900 readers) (Total 71967 readers) |
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Julie awakes to find an intruder in her bedroom. She is raped and abused while her parents sleep in the next room. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 26, 2005 |
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very well done story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jan 23, 2004 |
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A good story with a nice twist at the end. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sub_rini
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May 21, 2003 |
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Ummmmm very good had me thinking of it for a long time. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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May 17, 2003 |
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Good story with an interesting surprise ending. I was wondering about the lack of dialogue until I realized at the end there was no one there to have a real dialogue with. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Jul 11, 2003)
- There...was...no...one...there... I think I'd better read it again!
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| Reviewer:
OneHotThing4All
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May 17, 2003 |
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Well written with some erotic merit. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricGeisha
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May 17, 2003 |
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Pretty fucking good. Now I've to go on with my day getting completely horny thinking about this and your other story... dammit... (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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May 15, 2003 |
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There's not a lot wrong with the grammar and spelling, and admittedly a lot of people do like this sort of purely visual detail. But there's a lot more to do if you want to make it more effective for me: build it up a little more, get into her mind more (grammatically it's written from her point of view, but in practice you often seem closer to him - things like "she felt his surprise..."). And that self-justificatory bit at the end rings grossly false, I'm afraid. (4/10)
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