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Precious Things
Author: Powerone
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(Added on May 12, 2003)
(This month 15364 readers) (Total 29667 readers) |
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A beautiful young college girl meets an older man. She decides to find out what it would be like to make love to him. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
TenderFlesh
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Aug 15, 2003 |
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Excellent story - definitely fuel to the fire! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
sinsationalsub
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May 27, 2003 |
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This is just "sinsational"!!!! "giggle* (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 12, 2003 |
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I'm not really sure why his story was posted to the bdsm library, as there is no bdsm in it! All the same, it is quite a nice little tale, though a couple of things irritated me about it. There was a fair degree of repetition (e.g. four "last night"s in the first paragraph alone). Also, in the second half of the story, it kept switching from the first person ("I") to the third person ("she") narrative. Was this because two people had written the story? If so, a little checking before posting would have helped. Nevertheless, not a bad effort. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Powerone
(Edit) (May 12, 2003)
- This story was actually a dare, to write a romantic story. If you look at the other 23 stories I have on this site, this is not my type of story. Yes, the first and third person narrative change was due to two writers. We went through it so many times, just couldn't get all of them I guess.
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