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Suffer Another Day
Author: steve379
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(Added on May 3, 2003)
(This month 52207 readers) (Total 63835 readers) |
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This story is a continuation of the spy character Jinx that Halle Berry played in the James Bond film "Die Another Day". |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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it was good, but the paragraph's for me anyway are way to long (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan
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May 4, 2003 |
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Like Kemosabe, I, too, had to give up. I never did quite figure out what it was about. It was way too much work to plow through those huge blocks of text and the random insertion of numerous commas was very distracting. It needs paragraphs, it needs organization, it needs more dialog, and take out all the commas. A missing comma is less distracting than a superfluous one. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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May 4, 2003 |
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I had to give up. A paragraph or two would certainly have helped. Can't say that the plot was particularly satisfying either. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 3, 2003 |
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The storyline is OK and reasonably entertaining but very lengthy paragraphs and heavy over-use of the comma made the plot difficult to follow. (3/10)
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kittenfemme
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May 3, 2003 |
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A great spoof written with imagination. It was difficult to read though. The stilted sentence structure kept pulling me from the story. (5/10)
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