|
|
|
|
|
Terry and the Pirates
Author: Master Rhetoric
|
| |
(Added on May 1, 2003)
(This month 11743 readers) (Total 29529 readers) |
| |
Terry and Tonya are misused and abusedd by a crew of modern day pirates. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 4 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
50% |
0% |
25% |
25% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (5.5/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (7/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (4/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 19, 2006 |
| |
just doesn't cut it for me anyway (4/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Equalizer
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 4, 2003 |
| |
I agree with the other comments nontheless I thought it was an entertaining and sexy story.
(7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 4, 2003 |
| |
I would agree with ladys maid's comments, but score the story a little higher because it was mercifully free from the kinds of grammatical and spelling errors that plague many of the stories here. This author is capable of much better work, I think -- but this story could use a more convincing story line and better characterization. (6/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 2, 2003 |
| |
The story is OK but it is written in a very conversational, "matter of fact" style that provides little background to the situation or character development. It lacks any passion or eroticism and left me not really caring what happened to the two women involved. (4/10)
|
|
|
About 