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Writing my Future
Author: julise
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(Added on Apr 29, 2003)
(This month 117601 readers) (Total 170502 readers) |
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An attractive bdsm author is kidnapped and made to live out the rest of her life as a slave to a sadistic couple. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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jazmine232
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May 11, 2008 |
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A great story. I hope there is more! (10/10)
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tbear4759
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May 15, 2007 |
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in part 1 the back to back reference of being gagged with the dildo gag, collared, etc was unnecessary. if there are more chapters, would like to see her get raped and sodomized frequently. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
THE Traveller
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May 9, 2005 |
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"Writing My Future" is one of the best abduction/ bdsm stories I've ever read.
This story's very exciting from the beginning ( in which Laura is chloroformed and kidnapped ) to the last sentence.
The descriptions are rich, very visual and erotic.
I loved the dynamics between Laura and her kidnappers. I especially enjoyed her relationship with Lisa.
The helplessness of Laura was also realistic.
Overall a great erotic story that sates one's hunger for bondage. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 28, 2005 |
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Outstanding, hope there is more to cum :) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Dec 9, 2004 |
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i really enjoyed this story ... i liked the twist at the end of the last chapter posted when the Master is nice to her. are you going to continue it? please? (7/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Enjoyed the story so far and await to read more.. Glad to see in the responses that there is more to come... Well written... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Dec 20, 2003 |
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Well-written and very enjoyable story. We can't wait for the next part! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
julise
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2004)
- Thank you J, the next chapter is coming soon!
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Dec 11, 2003 |
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I liked it, however one itty bitty thing I found very repetitive and that was the use of the frequent 'I'. I realise that 'first person' is used, but there are also many ways to begin a sentence or describe things without the constant use of 'I' this, that and the other nearly every paragraph.
(7/10)
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- Replied by:
julise
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2004)
- I appreciate the feedback. I will take that into consideration.
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| Reviewer:
kayla
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Dec 1, 2003 |
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a great erotic read. Please dont make us wait too long for the next segment. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
julise
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2003)
- Thank you for your review! I am working on the next chapter right now.
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Nov 16, 2003 |
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This story was a big turn on for me, and I really hope there's more to come. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
julise
(Edit) (Nov 16, 2003)
- Thanks GaryWilcox. There is definitely more to come. This story is only about halfway finished. I appreciate your review. Thanks for reading!
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Nov 15, 2003 |
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Enjoyable story. Still with potential for more. I'd like some clearer descriptions of the bondage. Well-proofed too. Good work! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
julise
(Edit) (Nov 16, 2003)
- Thank you Equalizer. I did notice that the description of bondage was lacking a little in this last part. I will try to be more conscious of that. I truly appreciate your review as I appreciate the reviews from all of the reviewers before you.
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Sep 4, 2003 |
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I enjoyed the story very much. Well written. Please continue the story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lilly
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May 11, 2003 |
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Up to now I liked everything I read. Hope there'll be more soon! (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
don11
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May 9, 2003 |
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Clever idea.
Good clear writing. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 4, 2003 |
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This story is OK and reasonably well written but it is fairly short, both in terms of length and character development. It jumps fairly quickly from the build-up into the sub/dom scenes, which left me wondering how events had come to pass. I hope there is more to come in which we can find out more about the characters. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
rainee
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Apr 29, 2003 |
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A very good start to what I hope is much more to come....Keep up the good work !!!!! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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Apr 29, 2003 |
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Quite good. Certainly worth reading and with very interesting story elements. It seems a good lead up to a longer story. I look forward to reading more. (8/10)
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