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Batteries Not Included
Author: Couture
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(Added on Apr 28, 2003)
(This month 55323 readers) (Total 68308 readers) |
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Girl is introduced to the pleasures of sex and submission at the hands of her roommate and a pink vibe. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 7, 2010 |
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Wicked and feverishly hot little recollection of some sloppy messing about between two goils.
Couture's teasing descriptions and the dripping cajoling of Natalie are a treat and make temperatures rise from lukewarm to scorching the devil's arse in no time.
Story is underwear-changingly well written.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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May 6, 2003 |
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A good story, a little bit too fast and short, but good. (9/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 4, 2003 |
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What a great little story! A real pleasure to read, nice and light (but none the less erotic for that!) and pretty well written too. Maybe a quick scan with the language/grammar checker would be a good idea, but I loved it all the same. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
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May 2, 2003 |
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A really nice and cute story :-) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (May 2, 2003)
- Thank you for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Apr 30, 2003 |
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A little less Catholic guilt and it would have been a '10'. Minor mis-spellings, but hot enough to overwhelm them. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (May 2, 2003)
- Well, it *did* take place at a catholic girl's school;-)
- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Oct 19, 2003)
- Oh. Good point.
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| Reviewer:
tsosie
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Apr 29, 2003 |
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A very well done story. Fun and well written, great job. :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mskneeler
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Apr 29, 2003 |
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Another job of excellence on your part to further insure your permanent place in stories of F/F!
As usual, it left me with bated breathe and wondering why I could never have had a heavenly room mate like Natalie! Oh well!
The only slight disappointment I had with the story was that usually you do not allow the submissive one to experience orgasm, rather kept in a continuous state of erotic titillation; have you altered your scenarios now?
Your most avid fan,
neenee (JaneenMarie O'Brien)
binkyboom@hotmail.com (9/10)
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- Replied by:
S_Couture
(Edit) (May 2, 2003)
- Thanks mskneeler. I'm always looking for ways to alter my scenarios. I've written so much about denial with Denying Denise, Harriet Hotter, and Amazon dot cum, I needed a change. I hope it was still enjoyable.
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