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      Average (?):  (7.5/10) |   
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    | Reviewer: 
    mkemse
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Aug 27, 2004 |   
    |  | i really enjoyed this (8/10) 
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    ron8nl
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Jan 8, 2004 |   
    |  | As you know I am not harsh in my comments. If a story has the content I like (humilation, consent at the end or from the beginning on and it is no non sense) and it is readable and not too slow I rae it an 8. This story is actually too fast and simpy written, but rather too fast than too slow. It is a pitty that it ends here. (8/10)
 
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    rainee
  (Edit) | Rating:  | May 11, 2003 |   
    |  | An enjoyable read!!! Looking forward to more chapters....If there is any negative at all,it would be that I hope the pace slows a bit, and gives the reader a real chance to get to know the characters and what is inside of them.. (8/10) 
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    Rickgran
  (Edit) | Rating:  | May 5, 2003 |   
    |  | Good Story, fun to read (9/10) 
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    Equalizer
  (Edit) | Rating:  | May 4, 2003 |   
    |  | Enjoyable tale so far. Please continue. (8/10) 
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    ladys_maid
  (Edit) | Rating:  | May 4, 2003 |   
    |  | I feel I have to disagree with the earlier reviewers. I found the writing rather lifeless and, combined with less than ideal punctuation, much repetition and little character development, the whole thing left me cold. (4/10) 
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    robert216
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Apr 24, 2003 |   
    |  | One of the best (9/10) 
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    kittenfemme
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Apr 21, 2003 |   
    |  | Very nice! More please. (8/10) 
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    BruceBoxer
  (Edit) | Rating:  | Apr 21, 2003 |   
    |  | I really enjoyed this--nice way to begin the day--will have me thinking of training a slave for the rest of the day--nice tale Kelli, thanks. (8/10) 
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