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Never Trust A Friend
Author: Marion
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(Added on Apr 16, 2003)
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Two friends discover they have bizarre desires. This is a violent story of heterosexual as well as homosexual sado/masochistic lust as two friends discover they are sexually compatible, but fear keeps them apart until his wife and daughter encourage him to make the ultimate commitment. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Silenteyes
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Apr 21, 2003 |
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Excellent! I never expected this ending! Beautifully done! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Marion
(Edit) (Apr 21, 2003)
- Dear Silenteyes,
Thank you for taking the time to review my latest story. It is very gratifying to know that there are people who enjoy what write or even provide feedback when they don't enjoy it. I sincerely appreciate the high marks you gave "Never Trust A Friend". I have several stories posted at this site and invite you to read them also. Any and all comments are constructive and helpful. If you have any additional thoughts feel free to e-mail them to me. I get many ideas from reader responses.
Sincerely,
Marion
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| Reviewer:
bledsoul
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Apr 17, 2003 |
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I really loved the end. Excellent twist! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Marion
(Edit) (Apr 17, 2003)
- Dear bledsoul,
I am delighted you enjoyed the story and I appreciate the rating you gave it. So few people respond to stories, so when someone does it is gratifying, even if they don't like it. Feedback helps. Didn't plan on the ending, it just happened when I got there and I was quite pleased with the twist myself. Never know what my characters are going to do, even when I try to take them somewhere. Bizarre, but they end up taking me where they want to go. I have a few other stories on this site under the pen name of Marion, if you have not as yet read them, I invite you to do so. Again, feedback is precious to one who puts ink on paper, so to speak. In this story, (Never Trust A Friend) was it just the ending that made it for you or were you turned on by any other element of the story? I'd like to know. If you don't care to respond, please, once again, thanks for the very positive rating!
Shadow8145@aol.com
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