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My Sex Slave
Author: robertpaullocke
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(Added on Apr 16, 2003)
(This month 10286 readers) (Total 22232 readers) |
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A story about a slave being transferred to another man. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 23, 2006 |
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the idea and concept of the story is great, i was dissapointed with the text (7/10)
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Marion
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Apr 17, 2003 |
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First person stories do not allow you to adequately get inside the head of the victim or other characters in your story. Like the premise, but had difficulty staying with it and it did not provoke erotic reaction. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Apr 17, 2003 |
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An enjoyable read with good characterization, and almost charming in its way.
BUT (yes, a big but...)
the story is riddled with grammatical errors and inappropriate spellings, some of which are quite funny! I recommend that the author reads & re-reads his work before posting the next chapter. I look forward to reading it. (7/10)
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