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Mock Rape II: The Search for Claire
Author: Harold
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(Added on Apr 3, 2003)
(This month 14496 readers) (Total 35440 readers) |
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The sequel to "Mock Rape, Inc." in which Amy becomes a pony girl, Malcolm abducts the wrong woman, Cindy wants to know if Amy is for real, Bev bangs her head against the wall, Manfred is even more despicable than last time, Suzanne would like to know how you like her new shoes, Sebastian searches for new trainees, Grace gets even, and Claire really, really wishes she was home to take your call. |
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cookie411
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Well written and I love the pony girl parts, however toward the end it was too violent, I enjoyed part one of this story because it didn't go too far, In part two I started skipping parts so that I could get to the end. (7/10)
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xandra_miel
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As in the first part, I liked it for the depth of the characters. It is well written and well narrated.
Too violent to my tastes, and kind of sad at the end; but I enjoyed reading it anyway. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 31, 2009 |
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One of the rare occasions where the sequel outdoes the original. Of course, the former couldn't have existed without the latter, which leaves us in some kind of a dilemma bearing a slight resemblance to the egg and the chicken paradox.
Anyway, Harold does a nice number here, keeping everything tidy and sorted, which isn't a small feat considering all the folk that roam around in this here tale.
The words 'Good' and 'Writer' spring to mind, but since my check just arrived and as a consequence I'm ina cheery mood, I'll add 'Very' to the duo.
JJ (10/10)
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Corinna80
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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Like most of your stories a wonderful imagery written down in a perfect storyline.
I guess it's hard to write a sequal as the "innocence" of the initial one is lost, but I couldn't stop reading ;-)
Your stories stay among my all time favourites.
I wonder if you're still writing as I would love to read more of your work.
(10/10)
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bagles
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May 16, 2006 |
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I tought both stories were excellent. They kept you lock to the story and they just flow (10/10)
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Ayla Silver
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Apr 5, 2006 |
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An excellent story - one of the very few BDSM stories with a good plot - and very well written. I just couldn't stop reading this. I loved the humorous dialogue between Malcolm and Amy. It gave me a few laughs. I also found the ponygirl situations rather erotic.
But, as with almost all of the author's stories, it seems, I find fault with the ending. It is actually not as morose or anticlimatic as usual, since the bad guys are punished and the girls are freed, but it's not quite here or there. With "Out of the Frying Pan", the ending was very absolute. But here, I find it hard to choose whether this is a happy or tragic ending. Manfred and Sebastian are gone, but everything else appears to be in ruins. The freed girls are forever damaged and Malcolm can no longer work business as well. However, I suppose this is more realistic. After all, there is no completely happy ending in life. Even so, that changed my rating from a 10 to a 9. (9/10)
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ritual
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Dec 19, 2003 |
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I have to admit that this has been a wild ride especially reading both parts at my work. (I practically ignored the phones all day) I love horror and want to say that this author is almost up to Dean Koontz standards. Keep up the work and I am looking forward to more from this author. (10/10)
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rainee
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Apr 4, 2003 |
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Another FANTASTIC effort from this very accomplished authoer !!! Well written, very imaginative, the pace was fantastic !!!! Interesting and erotic from first word to last !! (10/10)
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