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Cheerleader Picture
Author: Ninja Turtle
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(Added on Mar 13, 2003)
(This month 412267 readers) (Total 628195 readers) |
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This has everything. The story of a High School cheerleader slowly turned into a bimbo sex slave slut. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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I thought the start of this story was a real mess. Tale should have kicked off with meeting the girl in the video-shop, with a flashback as intro to the downloaded pic she's supposedly in...
For the rest, I also feel there's too much needles babbling going on, plus lots of details that say nothing at all and could/should have been left out.
As an example we have the 'description' in the first paragraph about Paul's job. It takes 4 sentences to NOT tell you what the man does exactly...
Anyway, story was a nice read, nothing more, nothing less
JJ (8/10)
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axesis
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Dec 17, 2008 |
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I loved the story i would love to hear about what happened to the friend that anne raped. i am sure paul used her after as well. (10/10)
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studmaster58
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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A very hot and arousing story to be enjoyed over and over.....such a detailed masterpiece. (10/10)
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wagonaka
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Jan 4, 2008 |
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Almost a novel, really contains all what I like. Subjugation, breast enlargement, bestiality, piercing.... I love it.
Well written and structured. (10/10)
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nikita
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Oct 6, 2005 |
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This was yet another depraved story that attracts readers that you wouldn't think would like it. I've read it several time and although some parts could have been streamlined, the sex abuse was over the top. Wow!! (8/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 19, 2005 |
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Wild and wooly. Started fairly basic and kept growing, mutating if you will, into wilder and wilder situations. Well done. (9/10)
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palehorse
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Jul 20, 2005 |
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one of the best erotic stories ive ever read Thank You.
PaleHorse (10/10)
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CrazyMe
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May 5, 2005 |
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This story could have been quite good. It has a good theme, it is somewhat well-written and the author has a lot of twisted ideas. However, its weak spot is the author trying to drag a rather unrealistic psychological profile into it.
Also the end seems to be introducing too many new features too fast.
The length is a plus side, I think. A story cannot get too long - if there is something to write about.
Overall, I think it is an average story. (5/10)
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wowzz
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Aug 1, 2004 |
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Not so much description into the acts (4/10)
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peachers
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Apr 28, 2004 |
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i loved this story. one of the best
long;well maybe but' keeped me wet.
(8/10)
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bambipaige
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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Great story - great theme, very enjoyable. My only criticisms are that the characterization of Susie, especially at the beginning (and what there was of it) was a little unbelievable and the story started to drag after awhile. (9/10)
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belle morte
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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I didn't enjoy it. I liked the beginning, and then it flopped, and it was also too long. (4/10)
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buskeyTR
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Jan 4, 2004 |
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This is one of the best nc stories that I have read. The f/f portion with Susie using Anna is the best. (9/10)
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kof
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Oct 13, 2003 |
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very good, keep it up.
please write an other (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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Has everything, great themem, high school stories always read well, add in blackmail, humiliation and a cheerleader and you got a great foundation for a story (10/10)
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Klauss
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Jun 29, 2003 |
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Great storie like all Ninja Turtle stories. (10/10)
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kano
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Mar 29, 2003 |
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Nice Story, Excellent plot. Could use more detail especially when it get to the the other girl being turned into a slut. But a good story. (8/10)
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redEva
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Mar 22, 2003 |
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I have to agree with other reviewers that this story is somewhat awkward written. I found your shorter stories easier to read. Context on the other hand is delicious. I am sucker for body modifications – so that alone worked for me quite nicely. Overall – it could have been better if bit shorter. (8/10)
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Terry Gabriola
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Mar 21, 2003 |
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Actually I thought of giving it a 1, since all those tens early on don't ring true. Just to even them out a little.
The initial scenario is undoubtedly good, though the characterization is limited: it's good for those of you who get off on purely physical descriptions, I suppose. The writing begins okay, but gets more awkward to read as it goes on; it failed to keep my interest till the end for that reason. In fact, it's too long - for me, the story has shot its bolt after the first couple of instalments. (4/10)
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gizmo1
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Mar 20, 2003 |
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great story, a little to long. should have written to storys.7 (7/10)
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drake7
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Mar 19, 2003 |
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The story is good but it is hard to read, and I finally quit reading it, due to the lack of indentation and spacing between paragraphs. Content is more important than mechanics, but mechanics is important as well. (5/10)
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Parker
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Mar 14, 2003 |
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This is an old classic, which I've read and enjoyed many times. I'm glad to see it pop up again and I'm looking forward to seeing more Ninja Turtle stories. (9/10)
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trusser
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Jul 24, 2001 |
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Best I have ever read Delicious Deviant Loved the end Wish it could have gone on forever (10/10)
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tedmyg |
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Mar 3, 2001 |
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Super ! enjoyed. (10/10)
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Pball |
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Nov 30, 2000 |
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Containes everything what shall contain. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jesse |
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Oct 20, 2000 |
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No thanks. (1/10)
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Oct 9, 2000 |
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Originally known as The Cheerleader Picture and written by ninja. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Sep 23, 2000 |
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Enjoyable story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
ABrunetteWoman |
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Sep 8, 2000 |
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Overall quite a good story, with some intersting ideas, but not all that well written. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
chaoslord |
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Sep 6, 2000 |
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Great Story!!!! Lots and Lots of degrading behavior modification! I love the constant cumming and cruel mastery Paul displays. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rondal Baker |
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Sep 5, 2000 |
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Absolutely wonderful. Story brought out best in Anne's slutty behavior. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
PRS |
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Sep 4, 2000 |
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Great story of a girl turned into a total bimbo slut, it is a bit long in the beginning, that's why i gave it an 8, but stick with it (8/10)
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