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Barbarian Tortures II
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on Mar 12, 2003)
(This month 54725 readers) (Total 80555 readers) |
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"B.T.II" is a stand alone story that shares characters and plot with the previously posted "Barbarian Tortures". |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Mar 13, 2003 |
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You need to spin it out more, get deeper into the minds and thoughts of those involved, let the reader identify with it more. Then it won't read quite so much like the plot of a bad movie.
But keep at it - there's potential there. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2003)
- The comparison to the plot of a bad movie is unfortunate, but your otheriwse constructive reiew is appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
WMassa
(Edit) |
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Mar 13, 2003 |
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Second try - no real hit again. Isn't the attempt to not tell right through the story a bit complicated? The art of letting only little (of interest) happen starts to bore readers. Try again, Sam Faibhar! How about more barbarian torture rather than tortured barbarians?? (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Mar 13, 2003)
- Dear WMassa,
Thank you for the rating and thoughtful views. The given name of "Sam" is perhaps the most mind boggling.
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