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The Training
Author: Ninja Turtle
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(Added on Mar 12, 2003)
(This month 116104 readers) (Total 187384 readers) |
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Turning my daughter into a willing sex slave. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Okay, so this premise could be the ultimate wet dream for some of the male species of the population, and I sure did enjoy the story myself. But like ramses pointed out, this is 'just another' pumped-up erotic tale, with no real BDSM theme in it, not even remotely.
It would have qualified, if, like redeva and JonBlacker said, the training of the lasses had been included.
Altho highly erotic, because of the lack of BDSM, I cannot go higher than a nice eight.
JJ (8/10)
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studmaster58
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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This is my deepest darkest fantasy put to fiction, love this to become a reality...Would like to see this idea developed, longer version or updated chapters. (10/10)
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ramses
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Jan 1, 2007 |
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Just some MC, no real BDSM or humiliation. The sex scenes were enjoyable though, but the story wasn't hard enough. (6/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 25, 2006 |
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WOW, Hot, Hot, Hot need I say more (10/10)
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BigCat
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Jun 21, 2005 |
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Wow! NOw that is really pushing the fantsy envelope. (8/10)
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JonBlacker
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Nov 30, 2004 |
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Excellent. I wish it was longer and covered the training. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jefferson
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Aug 5, 2004 |
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Awseome!This is excactly the subject I enjoy the most and this was also very well written story.I would really love to see you write new parts to this.
Thank you very,very much.I can honestly say that this was propably the most enjoyable story I`ve read at BDSM Library.
Although just like redEva already said,I would have also liked a part in which the training itself would have been described.But anyway,it is almost perfect now as it is :) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emma
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Jun 26, 2004 |
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Very creative! I enjoyed the story immensely and was sorry it came to an end when it did.
(8/10)
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cvilla
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Mar 17, 2004 |
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10 (10/10)
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blackshadowmast
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Mar 13, 2003 |
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Loved it so much, fucked my wife so hard. I wish there was a camp like that, my wife would be one the first members there.
Thank you (10/10)
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redEva
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Mar 13, 2003 |
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GREAT, BEAUTIFULL, EROTIC,....
i love the story, only wish there was a part describing the training it self *pouts* well maybe later, together with the wife part *winks*
(10/10)
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