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Captive In Iraq
Author: Pauly
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(Added on Mar 7, 2003)
(This month 12153 readers) (Total 36160 readers) |
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Two student graduates stray to close to the Iraq / Turkish border and suffer the consequences. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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liked the story, my only wish is that you had choosen out of respect to those currently serving us, a different location, the Iraq/Iran location hits way to close to home at this present time (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
agp_millie
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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Look forward to the next part.
Poor Mel. It just goes to prove that it's safer to accept your situation than to fight it.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Mar 15, 2003 |
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I always like exotic/historic settings, but the author doesn't make much of an effort to set the scene here. Nor is much of an attempt made at characterization. And there are a number of errors that prove once again (if anyone still needs to be convinced) that you just can't trust your proof-reading to those undiscerning spell-checkers:
"were stripped to the waste." "with each violet movement" "un-swallowed seaman" etc.
All that being said, I hope the author continues but that he, um, tries to get inside the characters a little more.
(4/10)
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Tractortorture
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Mar 8, 2003 |
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Good start to the story. Wil be interestd to see how it develops (7/10)
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