|
|
|
|
|
Michele's Mistake
Author: Jackpot
|
| |
(Added on Jan 29, 2003)
(This month 56949 readers) (Total 92158 readers) |
| |
Michele makes a grave mistake when she fires her secretary. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 5 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
40% |
40% |
20% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (7/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Oct 4, 2005 |
| |
very well done, hope there is more (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
Emily
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 18, 2003 |
| |
This one is rather descriptive in an interesting way. You can really feel for the character losing to the little brat. Wow, what humiliation! (9/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jun 14, 2003 |
| |
I agree that it seemed far fetched, right up until the narrator has Jenny come into the office. What a great moment. I know if I were Michelle I would have been terrified, not necessarily of the girl but of her beating me up in front of my peers. More please! (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
(Edit) |
Rating: |
May 16, 2003 |
| |
Quite well written and exciting, even if it is a little far-fetched. I agree that it needs a sequel and hopefully this would flesh out the characters which, at this stage, are still fairly light weight. (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
isolomon
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 31, 2003 |
| |
Very nice. Needs a sequel (8/10)
|
|
|
About 