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Baker's Dozen
Author: BZ
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(Added on Jan 7, 2003)
(This month 103588 readers) (Total 173158 readers) |
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A story in progress. Kat Lang a snoopy reporter gets the right idea about the new admirer of her friend Vicky Greene, unfortunately for her. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
AndrewBlack
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Apr 17, 2004 |
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A very enjoyable read, witty and well constructed. The year long hiatus between start and end was worth the wait. Keep up the writing! (7/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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not sure what to say (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Banebringer
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Jan 23, 2004 |
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If BZ can step up the grammar and spelling it will be a good series. I like the imagery and the sudden realizations his characters come to are written to put you there with them. Good style, just watch the spelling and grammar. It does make a difference in the quality of read.
I'm looking forward to the next one! (5/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Apr 15, 2004)
- I just posted the final two parts, and have revised the grammar and spelling from the first three. Check it out.
BZ
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| Reviewer:
agp_millie
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Jul 26, 2003 |
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Please hurry with the next part ...
Poor Kat and what will happen to Vicky??? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
BlackRad!sh
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Mar 20, 2003 |
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I love this story and look forward to the next installment! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
WMassa
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Jan 17, 2003 |
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... if it turns out to be as hard as "extreme" pretends. So far a tasty beginner, but 775 Mill. $ should allow some real hardys... (As to part 2:) Nice, but still not extreme (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2003)
- Thank you for your interest in my story, I am glad that you like it. I just posted part 2, and there is more to come.
BZ
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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Come on folks, be real. There's a fair visual kind of impact to it, but it's full of grammatical errors and the like, there's not much in the way of the kind of character building that can make otherwise unrealistic scenario's work. But add some of that in and it could be improved a lot. (5/10)
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Silenteyes
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Jan 8, 2003 |
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Excellent story ... so far! I came to the end of part one and YIKES ... that is all there was... I am hooked I would love to read more. Very intriging, interesting, suspencefull and kept me on my toes wanting more. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2003)
- Thank you for your interest in my story, I am glad that you like it. I just posted part 2, and there is more to come.
BZ
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| Reviewer:
Firepager
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Jan 7, 2003 |
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please do not take long with part 2 (9/10)
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- Replied by:
bcsollte
(Edit) (Jan 12, 2003)
- Thank you for your interest in my story, I am glad that you like it. I just posted part 2, and there is more to come.
BZ
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