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All Or Nothing
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Jan 4, 2003)
(This month 65737 readers) (Total 94181 readers) |
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A battered wife finds herself in the possession of a stranger after her husband loses a poker game. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 19, 2007 |
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A well woven story, somewhere between a morality tale and a mythical journey. Some of the transitions are a bit rough but not enough to disrupt the stories flow. I like it ;) (9/10)
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ares626
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Jul 2, 2006 |
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i loved it it had a good story and i could relate to it thank you!! (10/10)
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longrover
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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A story that lets someone escape from hell is rare and valuable. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 13, 2004 |
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great everything (9/10)
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julise
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Nov 17, 2003 |
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I thought that this story was absolutely incredible! It was very sensuous and erotic and best of all, very well written. Wonderful work. (10/10)
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emilynh
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Jan 7, 2003 |
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The structure-- short scenes, the alternating back and forth btwn Darryl and Jessie-- worked very well. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
karen
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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Kallie, I really like your stories. Could you possibly put in a "********" or some symbol to show time change? I like the way you move in and out of different scenes but I admit some kind of signal would help. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Trusser
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Jan 5, 2003 |
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Once again Kallie has managed to weave a wonderfully written tale into an erotic experience. I admit she’s one of my favorites. (9/10)
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Firepager
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Jan 4, 2003 |
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this could replace sleeping pills (1/10)
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- Replied by:
Kallie Thomas
(Edit) (Jan 4, 2003)
- A suggestion--if you can't offer anything constructive, if the best you can do is throw out incredibly low ratings for stories that don't appeal to you, do us all a favor and stop reviewing. The story codes are there for a reason--if this type of story isn't violent enough for you, find codes that match your tastes.
You know, the writers here work a hell of a lot harder on their stories than you do on your reviews. Try to be fair in your ratings instead of offering up this crap.
Kallie
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