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The Heist
Author: Leones
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(Added on Dec 24, 2002)
(This month 63272 readers) (Total 77775 readers) |
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Young model visits a New York gambling casino and suffers through a humiliating ordeal during a hold up. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
littleone_
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Jul 5, 2008 |
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Leones finished this one, and all stories NEED an ending. I like how he keeps the stories short and you can finish reading it in one sitting. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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it started out great, i only wish the humilation she suffered was much longer and much more detailed, this could easily have been a 10 plus (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoffinNail
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Dec 29, 2002 |
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Punctuate! Run on sentences are so tough on the reader. Break them up, there are numerous logical "pause points" where you could insert a period. This would do a lot to neaten up sentences, make them more palatable.
--CN (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Dec 26, 2002 |
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Oh come now, a casino doesn't have merely 3 guards. This story makes it seem like a walk in the park to break into a casino. If a couple guys with ski masks came anywhere near a casino, the police would have already been alerted. I did like the part about him using the gun to elicit responses from the girl. All in all the sexual content of the story was mediocre at best. I mean geez, a blowjob? Is this a BDSM site or a SoftCore porn area. (4/10)
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