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It Started In The Hotel Room
Author: zone
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(Added on Dec 22, 2002)
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She is in a hotel room and someone opens the door and in walks a stranger.... a stranger set to train you to be his. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
Breathless
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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There is not enough character development for me to care about any of these people. I don't find the master sexually arousing at all (as I would for most stories of this type), and I found the main character's inability to cum to be unlikely.
I notice now that this is an older story - which is just as well since I have no desire to read any additional chapters of it. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 14, 2005 |
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add more chapters so i can adjust me review (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
hels
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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Really enjoyed this and was disappointed that it hadn't been continued, such good characters with so much moe to explore. (9/10)
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rcb
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Apr 6, 2003 |
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Basic premise is fine,but needs work with sentence structure and spelling. Keep trying. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoffinNail
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Dec 29, 2002 |
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Interesting idea, but the writing is so plodding, the descriptions so lacking that it's tough to get much enjoyment here. Could really benefit from some spicing up.
--CN (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
OneHotThing4All
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Dec 27, 2002 |
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The woman's PoV is great. Well written. (9/10)
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