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Nothing Personal
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Dec 16, 2002)
(This month 15626 readers) (Total 36251 readers) |
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A mafia runner pays a terrible price when she is caught skimming profits. |
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Sep 1, 2007 |
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I found this story to be terrifying!!! The second time I read it I had to stop before she died, but ... the rape scenes were extremely realistic as was the girls terror. Good job writing a horrible story!!! (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Aug 8, 2004 |
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Very well written short story. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 2, 2004 |
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everything you write is great, that simple (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
GdRsDiamond
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May 9, 2003 |
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Could compete with my own Lord and Master, in fact. The writing was excellent! I can't pretend I wasn't disappointed that there wasn't more pain for her. Esp. when he was so gentle, speaking to her so tenderly, I started trembling, hoping that the scenes that followed would involve that same demeanor as he tortured her cruelly. But, still, that can not reflect on my rating, it is the authors privilege to direct the story line, as long as the plot is credible, and this one certainly was. thank you for an excellent read! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Apr 2, 2003 |
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You could spin it out a bit more, especially in the initial setting-up, so that we get to empathize (or not!) more with the characters.
But it's nicely structured writing with better grammar and word use than most. (8/10)
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bigone
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Dec 19, 2002 |
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Well written and well executed, but not much erotic content. (7/10)
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castle2001
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Dec 17, 2002 |
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About the best of Miss Thomas's stories. (8/10)
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