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Fraternity Girl
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Dec 16, 2002)
(This month 55531 readers) (Total 79918 readers) |
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An innocent freshman unwittingly beats out the competition, winning the dubious honor of being named this year's. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
CoffinNail
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Dec 29, 2002 |
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Enjoyable, fun, excellent action.
--CN (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Dec 17, 2002 |
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This was somewhat better than the story I just read, the "Lesson Plan" story. The plot was a bit better developed. However, my same complaint remains. What does her dorm mate have against her? This is never explained. Nor is it explained why she is supposed to like being raped, as her dorm mate seems to expect (see the end of the story). What I would reccomend to this author is to articulate the buildup more, so as to make the story easier to understand. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
CoffinNail
(Edit) (Dec 29, 2002)
- These are short stories--they don't need a huge buildup or indepth background. Enough that the victim's background is established, her naivete made clear. Perhaps you're asking a bit much for short porn stories?
--CN
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| Reviewer:
foxfire109
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Dec 17, 2002 |
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shows the ignorance of youth, hot! (8/10)
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