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The Trainer
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Dec 10, 2002)
(This month 27428 readers) (Total 69950 readers) |
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Collecting for her brother's paper route, Adrienne knocks on the wrong door, walking into the hands of a man whose job is procuring slaves. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
tragedy3
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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i like the concept of the story but i think it needs more details. maybe get into the victims head and see what she's thinking and feelimg. (7/10)
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cymbidia
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Jan 3, 2006 |
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Wow! Exactly my kinda stories. What a great writer--gotta be someone published letting his/her fantasies out to gallop around, i think. The writer is too accomplished, too smooth, too professional for anything else to be true. (10/10)
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ramses
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Sep 5, 2005 |
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very well written, makes me want to read more. (9/10)
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headhunter
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Jun 28, 2005 |
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I'm slowly working my way through Kallie's stories. Her victims and her tormentors are very real, and her scenes are believable. This one is her best so far. (10/10)
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agp_millie
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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Poor victims. (sigh!) But so very well written, please do follow up? PLEASE!!! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 14, 2003 |
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Loved the story, hope there is more
Never realized how it could be collecting for a paper route, nothing like helping a sib;ing and their job (10/10)
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lindalookingla
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May 20, 2003 |
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While its difficult to find a poor story with Kallie Thomas, this could be one of her best. For a short story, she develops her character quickly, and forcefully. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Trusser
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Dec 10, 2002 |
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Excelent as always (9/10)
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