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Devils Island
Author: Balor
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(Added on Dec 10, 2002)
(This month 253972 readers) (Total 425504 readers) |
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This is a long story. The story follows several women from their abduction to their new lives as slaves and beyond. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sylvia_ber
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Apr 13, 2007 |
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Surely one of the best stories i ever saw on the net. The right ammount of anything. Well written!
Thank you for posting! (10/10)
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dumboldon
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Feb 17, 2007 |
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Yes, at last a sstory line that makes sense and builds...just the thing I want!!!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
masteralex_48_49
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Jan 3, 2007 |
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One of the better stories I have read. Would love to read more. sequel please! (9/10)
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Coventry_Slave
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Jan 5, 2006 |
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This has got to be the best story I have read on here to date.
It will get a 10/10 from me, and I cannot wait for this fine piece of work to be completed.
Would be nice to concentrate more on the main characters in the finaly, rather than the new ones, as the suspense has grown to much to miss those 4 slaves out of the storyline to much. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Oden
(Edit) (Jan 7, 2006)
- Thank you for taking the time to review and I am happy you have enjoyed the story. There are 6 more chapters to be posted. Rest assured you will find out what happens to the four main characters even if I will leave you hanging a little since there is a possibility of a sequel.
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The_Lord
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Oct 3, 2005 |
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This is a very good story. Quite the best I have read in a while (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Sep 10, 2005 |
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I am thinking this is close to being a rating of 10. It took m a few days to read through the story. This story is well worth reading! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Oden
(Edit) (Sep 12, 2005)
- Thank you for taking the time to review. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story when it is posted.
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| Reviewer:
Dr.Hass
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Aug 31, 2005 |
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I'm not thru with the story yet but so far it's one of the best I've read here. Awesome work. (9/10)
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Oden
(Edit) (Sep 5, 2005)
- Thank you for your kind words. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story.
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Aug 30, 2005 |
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Very good story. I especially liked Jackie's defloration. Be careful not to introduce too many characters. It would make it harder to follow your story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Oden
(Edit) (Sep 5, 2005)
- Thank you for taking time to review. I hope you will enjoy the remainder of the story when it is posted.
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| Reviewer:
nikita
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Jul 27, 2005 |
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The plot was very well conceived. The escriptions were vivid. The four victims and their fates were hard to keep track of when they were all in one scene. I had to keep going back to the beginning to see who was whom. I liked this story because the tortures were well described and the tormentors were wicked. My favorite characters were Gina and the Master, because there was a redemptive factor there. The most obvious improvements needed were more proof-reading and spell-checking. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more chapters. (8/10)
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balorlv
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2005)
- Thank you for your review. I am glad that you enjoyed the story so far. 4 more chapters have been added and the already posted ones revised, which hopefully has eliminated the grammar and spelling errors and make the story more enjoyable to read. I hope you will enjoy the new chapters and when time permits I will finsh the remaining outlined chapters and post them.
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alexandra_p27
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Jul 26, 2005 |
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Great piece of fiction. I like the presentation to the new Master most, when the girls are forced to strip and show there body.
Very humiliating by the use of excellent language. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 19, 2004 |
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yes, there are gammer errors, but despite that this story was HOT!!!!! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
balorlv
(Edit) (Aug 11, 2005)
- Thank you for your review. Hopefully most if not all errors have been eliminated in the revised version. Some new chapters have been added too.
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| Reviewer:
Abraxas
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Aug 18, 2004 |
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If not for the occasional grammatical errors this story would be a 10 - extremely entertaining fantasy adventure to say the least. Please finish this one soon Balor. I can't wait for your next installment... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
balorlv
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2005)
- Thank you.Hopefully the errors have been correted in the revised version. Some new chapters added and more to come soon.
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stream099
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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Agree with other reviwers as to grammar, etc. Great plot, story and want a conclusion. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
balorlv
(Edit) (Aug 12, 2005)
- Thank you for yor review. I'm sorry it taken so long to continue the story but eventually all chapters will be posted.
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| Reviewer:
robert370
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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The author is gifted but the story suffers from not having been proofread. Spelling mistakes, missing words and grammar errors are common and annoying. (8/10)
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agp_millie
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Nov 18, 2003 |
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Just too much ... well, for one towel, needed THREE towels by the time got half way and was a moooing, barking wreck.
Thankyou Balor.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Oden
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2004)
- I know it has been several months since you read my story. I just wanted to say thank you for your review and kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the story. The next 12 chapters of Devil's Island should be posted in the spring sometime if you are interested in read the second installment of the story. Again thanks.
Oden aka Balor
Balor48@excite.com
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Jul 20, 2003 |
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very well written and most enjoyable! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Oden
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2004)
- I know it has been several months since you read my story. I just wanted to say thank you for your review and kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the story. The next 12 chapters of Devil's Island should be posted in the spring sometime if you are interested in read the second installment of the story. Again thanks.
Oden aka Balor
Balor48@excite.com
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| Reviewer:
mickni2000
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Jul 14, 2003 |
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This is just an excellent and exciting story! Please more of this. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Oden
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2004)
- I know it has been several months since you read my story. I just wanted to say thank you for your review and kind words. I am glad you enjoyed the story. The next 12 chapters of Devil's Island should be posted in the spring sometime if you are interested in read the second installment of the story. Again thanks.
Oden aka Balor
Balor48@excite.com
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| Reviewer:
mickydoughty
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Dec 12, 2002 |
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Great story. Though sometimes difficult to keep up with all the characters, as the author often jumps midway between all those in the story.
Do keep up the good work, hope to read more. Hopefully next time when describing a character allow the situation to flow a little before you jump to describe someone else. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Dec 11, 2002 |
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The reason this got a 7 was because of the writing skills, or rather, lack thereof. Plural markers were missing, and other things were blatantly wrong. Besides that, it was a fun story, albeit a bit unrealistic. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
sfink
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Dec 11, 2002 |
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Great story keep up the hard work (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
carriet13
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Dec 11, 2002 |
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Keep writing we look forward to reading you again (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
smmaster
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Dec 11, 2002 |
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A Good story, I enjoyed it allot.
Hope we get follow ups soon.
only some minor spelling mistakes prevents it from getting the full rating (9/10)
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