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The Perils of Pauline's
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Nov 28, 2002)
(This month 103312 readers) (Total 255947 readers) |
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For the men who want the perfect life, or is it wife? |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
monica_snatch
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Mar 17, 2009 |
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The first story, what I read of it, looked quite interesting.
I can't comment any further than the dressing scene in the first chapter. That was as much bad grammar as I was prepared to subject myself to.
I've given the score I have mainly based on the grammar.
(3/10)
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Lar194
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Oct 20, 2004 |
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Then endings were always a surprise. You have to read the stories to enjoy all the suprise endings. All the adventures were all the right length and well written. Keep writing please. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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good story, simply not into animals (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Wyn
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Feb 10, 2004 |
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Misuse of apostrophies & sentence structure made the series hard to read and get into right from the beginning. Commas are used in place of periods, turning paragraphs and dialogue into one, long, run-on sentence. Several times, it seemed the author improved on punctuation, only to have it revert to the previous misuse.
The plots itself were good, but the numerous mistakes detracted greatly from reading enjoyably. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Sep 9, 2003 |
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I really do enjoy the Peril's series! Part 13 is another wonderful installment in the Pauline's series. Pagan, you have a wonderful knack for intesity that makes the blood boil, nicely done!! (8/10)
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Nitrofox
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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It's a pity. Pagan sometimes writes really good stories that are written well and seem extensively thought out. Then comes the occasional story that has bad grammar and spelling. This kept me from finishing the story. Please write like you usually do. (6/10)
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RTNYMaster
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Feb 27, 2003 |
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I didn't read past the first four paragraphs of Chapter 1. The spelling, grammar, punctuation and word usage was so atrocious it would have received an F in elementary school. (1/10)
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redEva
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Jan 28, 2003 |
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very exciting and well written. i truly enyojed it at least few times over. thank you for sharing your fantazies :) (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Jan 27, 2003 |
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Nicely done concept even though I prefer them a little more violent. (7/10)
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