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The Outlaw's Revenge
Author: Big Jake
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(Added on Nov 18, 2002)
(This month 171249 readers) (Total 278420 readers) |
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A teenage girl's testimony sends a gunslinger to prison. After four years without a woman in that West Texas hell-hole, he breaks out with one thought on his mind -- to even the score with the girl who sent him up. And that girl is now nineteen, beautiful, blonde and tan, and she's got more curves than the Rio Grande. And she's alone on her daddy's ranch. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
ready1
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Feb 21, 2010 |
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Really great story. Like every chapter of it. When they tie her to the horse... it's just spectacular!
Too bad no new Jake stories has been posted in a while.
/R1. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 23, 2005 |
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altho i do not like stories set in the old west like this, i found the story itself great and over looked the time frame (9/10)
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gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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Better as a spoof on Westerns than as erotic material. Jake is good writer that could have done better. (6/10)
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pam
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Jul 26, 2003 |
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Very well written and very very arousing. Kept me on the edge of my seat and I could not wait to keep reading and reading and reading ... this author went inside my head and pulled out a lof of my desires when he wrote this story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Aniga
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Jun 4, 2003 |
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The very high degree of promise of the earlier chapters has not been sustained towards the end. Doesn't stop me from reading the updates, though. Needs fresh inputs. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 8, 2003 |
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I look forward to each new chapter although I must admit that some of them are becoming a bit tedious. Another problem is that I don't see where this story is ultimately going, a serious concern for me as a reader. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Dec 2, 2002 |
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Began well enough - I thought this was going to be a really good tale: scene nicely set, and so on. Pity it degenerated into tired clichés and anachronistic language later on. The author clearly has the ability to produce good work, so keep at it! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Dec 1, 2002 |
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Hello it was very good.. i enjoyed reading it..Hopeing that i will be able to read more of the story
Thank you so much
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marcus
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Nov 19, 2002 |
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Howdy Big Jake! Sure is a mighty fine story you done posted to this here site. An' that Honey is a purdy thang too. Be sure an' get back safely from your rustlin' and post the next chapter for us folks real soon, ya hear? (9/10)
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- Replied by:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) (Dec 1, 2002)
- Marcus and Peachmellon -- Jake gave me a call today and his computer has gone down again. I wouldn't be surprised to learn that that cheap SOB is still running on a Commodore.
But when I mentioned that his story had gotten a couple of reviews, he asked me to pass along his thanks for your kind words.
He'll probably thank you himself once he gets back on line.
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