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Jane's Bitch
Author: Brenda
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(Added on Nov 18, 2002)
(This month 16760 readers) (Total 38494 readers) |
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Two girls who share an aparatment find excitement and contentment together in lesbian D/s pleasures. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 13, 2009 |
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Very enjoyable read.
I should add maybe we could all fart in Nitrofox's general direction. I'm not disputing his/her opinion, but why go on rating stories of an author which he/she obviously doesn't like?
Seems he/she is way too eager to be able to add a low score.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
qc_94
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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Highly enjoyable, loved the language used. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
whiskey
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Sep 17, 2003 |
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I very much enjoyed this short story. It is fairly well written and really hot, if you like dirty f/f fantasies. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 7, 2003 |
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A fairly well written story that could use a few little touch ups to improve it. Just a little bit more editing needed and not overusing the same descriptions would help. But overall, a good story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Apr 6, 2003 |
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The story was based around just a few phrases that were used over-much, in my opinion. "Cheesy Toes" for example was used about a score of times in the first few paragraphs, then it was "sexy" all the time, then "scent" was used constantly. I found this to be a wholly uninteresting story that was severely lacking in any "credibility" as such. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mskneeler
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Nov 21, 2002 |
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Brenda, you are a total dream for the wonderfully exotic, F/F D/s stories you SO capably produce! I also adore the fact that in most cases, you do have the Dominatress to practice 'orgasm-denial' on her oh-so-willing submissive! I truly cherish your stories and sincerely hope they will continue to come, and come ever so much more frequently as time goes on!
Keep up the wonderful work!
Your avid fan,
neenee (Janeen Marie O'Brien)
binkyboom@hotmail.com (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
S_Couture
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Nov 20, 2002 |
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Unlike Tourguide, I rather enjoy sucking a toy every now and then, I also rather liked the story and it was good in terms of fetish fiction. If you don't like fetish fiction, it would probably be a good idea to stay away from such stories.
If you like the thought of licking, smelling, and tasting what others may consider 'dirty', then this story is recommended.
For improvements, I would like to see maybe one more edit where the author could do just a little bit more tweaking and easily turn the story into a ten.
It is certainly a better written story than a four. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Nov 19, 2002 |
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I might not be the best person to be reviewing Brenda's stories, because I don't find the idea of sticking someone's stinky feet in my mouth to be at all appealing.
I try to base my reviews on the merits of the stories, not the content so much, but I just didn't really like that way they were worded. Nothing against the author, just personal prefernce. (4/10)
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