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Jennifer
Author: Jennifer Nylon
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(Added on Nov 14, 2002)
(This month 407040 readers) (Total 669749 readers) |
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Jennifer's submissive nature is aroused by her cruel boyfriend. This story will have many parts. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Jorgy444
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Jul 23, 2012 |
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A decent jerk off story. Would recommend
developing your characters more and simply
proofreading would make a great improvement. (7/10)
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Viator
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Aug 30, 2011 |
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This story has only one thing missing .. chapter 21-723 (10/10)
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Laura.Dane
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May 17, 2011 |
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Powerfully detailed, well-written and incredibly erotic. (10/10)
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Mgdspirit
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Dec 31, 2009 |
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I really enjoyed this story dear, and how you kept begging for comments even. You are truly a lady who knows what men love, and as a sadist, your detailing Jennifer's humiliation was truly arousing, and overall I thought it quite well written. I will look forward to more from you...please?(9/10)
MGD (9/10)
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Wanda2008
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Dec 29, 2007 |
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Well... I am waiting for the next parts. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 27, 2007 |
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has everything it should have, hope there is either more like this to cum or more of this
re read it had to raise my review (10/10)
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Abe Froman
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Dec 12, 2006 |
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Wonderfully wicked, imaginative and merciless... (9/10)
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ksusha29
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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Very captivating!!! You're a gifted writer:) I absolutely loved it! (9/10)
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Master Mark
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Dec 26, 2005 |
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Great story. I loved it. (10/10)
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radgirl
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Dec 14, 2005 |
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I loved the story so far. I wi0sh you would keep going (10/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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A wild, wild ride. Nonstop humiliations. (9/10)
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palehorse
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Jul 19, 2005 |
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loved it very good giving me good ideasfor my own sub
(9/10)
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headhunter
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Apr 12, 2005 |
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I want MORE! Well done and very imaginative. My only complaint is that no one seems to come in her cunt. Surely she could be on the pill, or have long-term array of implants in her arm? Also, could she do cleanup of other women after they've been fucked? And felching. (10/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 17, 2005 |
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that was a very good story! i liked it a lot, but it would have nice to show her a little bit of affection from one the girls owners! (8/10)
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Lindalooking
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Dec 2, 2004 |
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When this story was first posted, the few chapters online were really not enough to get a feel for the story. Well, I stumbled on the updated version the other day, and was please to find an enjoyable story that has just about everything the perverted mind wants to read! Ms Nylon does an excellent job of holding the main character to a steady pulse, which makes the entire "trip" believable and a truly enjoyable read. (9/10)
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Useuhard
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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Truly a wonderful read. I only wonder if there will be more to it so that I can enjoy it, as well as share it with my wife to enjoy as well. (9/10)
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bernie
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Jul 8, 2004 |
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excelent...the type that gets you all very wet and want to just cum all over yourelf.... and I did, too!!!!!!!!!!!!! (10/10)
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gojack10
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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Good, but not great. Too much \'slut\', \'slut\' dialog. (8/10)
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Roamer
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Mar 18, 2004 |
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Wow! (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Sep 1, 2003 |
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Very enjoyable story. I look forward to future parts. (9/10)
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Kostly
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Jul 16, 2003 |
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Please add more.... I love it... one of the best I have read in 10 years... cant wait for more... What a fantisy Mind you have... please contact me, for I would be honored to meet such a great writer, and a beutiful mind:) (10/10)
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don11
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Apr 10, 2003 |
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Excellent. Really good opewning. My only complaint is that it goes on too long. I feel that it should have ended earlier. As it is the element of believability suffers.
(8/10)
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babyd
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Jan 26, 2003 |
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Excellent story, thank you for writing it. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Karl Hessup
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Jan 14, 2003 |
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Why I like your story: 1. Good pacing. Not everything happens to your character all at once or too soon. 2. Your judicious use of minimal descriptions of characters and settings. No lengthy speeches or discourses. 3. No convoluted plot lines. 4. Good grammar and spelling for the most part. Very few, if any, bdsm writers on the internet have editors to improve their work. When the writing is clean, spare, grammatical and error free, I know I'm reading the work of someone who cares about the craft of writing. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Merlinwater
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Jan 12, 2003 |
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Wow this story is great, at no15 now cant wait to read the rest! (10/10)
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Master_c
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Jan 11, 2003 |
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This story started out Ok, but has since lost my interest. It seems that the author has gotten a bit carried away with the thoughts of trying to do to much to soon. Could have been a great story! (5/10)
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revaler
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Jan 6, 2003 |
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Thank you so much for writing that story. I can hardly wait to read the next parts. It's just that great, thank you :) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2003)
- 10/10? *blush* Thank you so much.
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| Reviewer:
kleintje15
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Jan 5, 2003 |
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I liked the story alot you are very creative . (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Jan 6, 2003)
- I am? Thank so much.
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| Reviewer:
alphie712fr
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Jan 4, 2003 |
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Very very good story, nicely constructed plot, superb dialogs.M/F domination is not my cup of tea, but the F/F action is great: Sylvia is a perfect humiliatrix! If this is author's first try,it's a "coup de maître". (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Jan 6, 2003)
- Thanks so much.
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| Reviewer:
seumas
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Dec 27, 2002 |
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Cracking good read. Good enough smut that I'd pay money to read the author's other works. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2002)
- *blush* You are so nice. This is my first story so there are no other works. Thanks for your nice comments.
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| Reviewer:
mdhike
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Dec 26, 2002 |
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Great story with good submission theme and good variety of sex secnes (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2002)
- *blush* I am embarrased, another 10/10? Thank you so much.
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| Reviewer:
bunnyrabbit48
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Dec 24, 2002 |
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Story is good, but doesn't have truly innovative idea of the Bondage, or submission scenes. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 28, 2002)
- Thank you for your comments. I am rather a novice at this.
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| Reviewer:
petashley
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Dec 14, 2002 |
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Another excellent example of a girl falling into slavery and learning that she finds enjoyment there despite herself. i look forward to reading more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 15, 2002)
- Thank you so much
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| Reviewer:
medee
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Dec 9, 2002 |
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Very good story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 12, 2002)
- Another 10/10? !!! *blush* I feel my head beginning to grow :) Thank you so much.
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| Reviewer:
balorlv
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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Great story hope you continue it. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 12, 2002)
- 10/10! *Blush* thank you so much.
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| Reviewer:
YNHumiliator
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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Your story is very horny indeed - its making me that way anyway ! Well written and pretty "real" as its from your perspective. Very good. Humiliation aspects are perfect. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 8, 2002)
- Thank you so much for your comments. I loooove to receive comments.
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| Reviewer:
Rickgran
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Dec 7, 2002 |
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A very good story that just keeps getting better! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 7, 2002)
- Thank you so much.
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| Reviewer:
object7
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Dec 4, 2002 |
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excellent story keep going! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 6, 2002)
- Thank you sooooo much! My mind is actually zinging along with ideas now! *blush*
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| Reviewer:
kokkentor
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Nov 29, 2002 |
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My God !! This story are really hot;) Where will it`s end ?? I can`t wait on the 7th chapter;)) (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Dec 6, 2002)
- Thank you so much for voting. I love to read the reviews. I've just finished Chapter 10
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| Reviewer:
merlin
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Nov 27, 2002 |
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It's very good, because of the spirit... (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 28, 2002)
- Thank you so much.
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Req_Pro
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Nov 23, 2002 |
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Good storyline, nice progressive stages, quick backround bio...A little catch-up on the storyline, then as nicely executed as it was...right into the action. I myself enjoy the decriptive passages, am definatly looking forward to the, already jested at, special treatment she is to receive. In conclusion I have obseverved that the author have a very anchored sense of realizm, and expresses it through vivid detail, that I throughly am looking forward to reading much more of.
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ReqPro@comcast.net (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 23, 2002)
- Thanks:) More to come.
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| Reviewer:
rainee
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Nov 19, 2002 |
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great story, very well told, keep up the great work...am looking forward to much more !!! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 20, 2002)
- Thanks so much. I'm trying to keep it going.
Jennifer
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boccaccio2000g
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Nov 17, 2002 |
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The story has promise in that it seems a little bit more authentically first person than most. There are a number of minor grammatical peccadilloes early on, which detract slightly from its overall impression. But more serious problem for me was that at times it strains credibility (not unusual for stories here, of course) -- Being told to eat like a dog was the most arousing thing in this young woman's experience? That seems rather unlikely to me, but of course nothing is impossible. Especially around here. <br>:-)<br> The good news is that the story seems like it might develop into something special. Good luck with it. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 20, 2002)
- Thanks, this is my first and I should take more time to check them but I get so excited about wanting to send it.
Jennifer
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| Reviewer:
nikki
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Nov 17, 2002 |
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I'm really enjoying this, lovely use of the word "squishy" ;-)
Eagerly awaiting further chapters. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 22, 2002)
- Squishy is the perfect word, isn't it?
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| Reviewer:
LoveDiver
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Nov 16, 2002 |
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Nice, more needed. Let Mr. Brown know I liked it. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 17, 2002)
- Thank you but I have no idea who Mr Brown is.
Jennifer
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Detrusor
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Nov 15, 2002 |
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A enjoyable and sweetie story, very easy to read. I would like to see the rest of the chapters. (9/10)
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Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2002)
- Thanks, it's sweet of you to say nice things. I've sent part 2 and I'm up to Part 5. It seems to write itself.
Jennifer
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Nov 15, 2002 |
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Very good work. I liked the descriptions a lot and the development of the scene. There's not a lot of character description, but I don't find myself wanting it in this story. It seems to fit, like looking at an abstract paiting, you can see the shapes and the colors, but it's your mind that make the picture come together. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2002)
- This is my first story so I'm learning as I go but thanks for the comments.
Jennifer
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BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Nov 16, 2002)
- Part Two was also quite nice. Despite the fact that you have said you have little or no experience in BDSM, I find your imagination with the subject refreshing. Keep posting.
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| Reviewer:
omechron
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Nov 15, 2002 |
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Very nice! Excelent charachterization, great description, and believable plot. Great for a first chapter. I'm anxious to see where you take this. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Jennifer-Nylon
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2002)
- Thanks, I have written two more parts and I'm also interested to see where it goes.
Jennifer
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