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Two Girls Team Up
Author: Mind Prison
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(Added on Nov 12, 2002)
(This month 17183 readers) (Total 39290 readers) |
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Eric finds himself in a tight situation when two of his friends, Jane and Lauren, discover that he has some dirty little secrets. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Nov 24, 2010 |
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Lacking passion and descent characterisation plus no action than being tied up means this story does very little for me. For this story to do little for me is bad as this is almost my perfect dream. (5/10)
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trainmanretep
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Feb 1, 2004 |
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a long set-up without any real action. Writing a bit better than other strory from same author, but very plain and without any passion. (5/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 17, 2003 |
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The story is told in a fairly matter-of-fact way that left me caring little about what happened to the "victim" of the tale. Descriptions are fairly bland and it is not especially well written (though it is competent). Pretty average stuff. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
robert216
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Nov 17, 2002 |
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An amusing short story. Well worth the read. (8/10)
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