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Oh Son What Have You Done
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Nov 10, 2002)
(This month 14516 readers) (Total 40474 readers) |
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Don’t let the school gang find out your little secrets, it can be painful for all concerned. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Mar 24, 2005 |
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egads!!! i am begging you ... use spellchecker and learn some grammar and and how to structure a sentence. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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I was trying to think up something original to say about how awful this story is, but the earlier reviewers have really said it all. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigone
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Nov 20, 2002 |
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This writer should learn English before afflicting the internet with his stories. This is REALLY bad writing. The storyline is not original. High school gangbangers blackmail their pretty teacher and her lesbo girlfriend, and have their way with them both. A nice touch is added by bringing the girl friend's two young teenage children into it. I don't mind the lack of originality, if the story is done well and has some imagination, especially erotic imagination. But this one is putrid. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Nov 17, 2002 |
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I hadn't tried a Pagan story in a while. When I saw the '9' below, I thought perhaps the author had spent more time on this one. But, I am sorry to say, this author continues to post work too hastily, spending far too little time proof-reading it. Thus making it next to impossible for many readers to stick around long enough to appreciate what might be very imaginative ideas.
With all the hundreds of stories to read here, why should we struggle with the garbled syntax and spelling of stories like this one? (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Detrusor
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Nov 13, 2002 |
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Very well written. The rape scenes are enjoyable. The only lack is the absence of other elements like BDSM gear or punishment devices. The better: all teh story can be developed at home (be careful) (9/10)
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