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Surprise Visit
Author: BDSM Bill
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(Added on Nov 8, 2002)
(This month 44973 readers) (Total 71526 readers) |
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A fun-loving couple gets their kicks by invading a remote home, where they torture and sexually abuse the husband and wife who live there. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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Almost realistic, which I consider high praise for a BDSM story. A male bottom is a nice change in pace. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 14, 2004 |
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very good detail, excellent layout and description, only wish you had Tina on the tread mill sweating also
one of the best stories i have read (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bashful1269
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Jan 15, 2004 |
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Excellent, loved the twist of fate. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ootwee
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Jan 4, 2003 |
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The very promising starting point of Clockwork Orange made me read this story.<br>From there one could go in different directions according to personal preference. My fantasy would be more in the area of college-going sons being raped by the woman, or the mother being forced to fuck the sons, definetely F/m ! F/m, of which we read so few good stories.<br>But I wouldn't torture those poor sods electrically ;)<br>Thanks for sharing your work with me/us.<br>I hope to read more of you. <br> (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
sexyangel
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Nov 15, 2002 |
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I enjoyed this story a lot. It is refreshing for the man to be on the receiving end once in a while. (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Nov 15, 2002 |
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Saw the earlier '10' and thought I'd have a look. OK, but nothing special. Sort of a very pale shade of clockwork orange. In fairness, I might have rated it higher if I were more into F/m.
But even the M/f parts were not very erotic to this reader. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Nov 8, 2002 |
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wonderful Sir.. i loved it. wow.. i really loved your story.i was hopeing to read more.. LOL
applemelody@aol.com (10/10)
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