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The Sibling Bond
Author: pamela
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(Added on Nov 8, 2002)
(This month 104444 readers) (Total 168678 readers) |
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Submissive teen-ager and her dominant brother find others with similar tastes. Complications ensue. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Losalt
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May 14, 2010 |
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This isn't one of my favorite stories, but holy <insert word of your own choice>!!!
It's the best story that I don't feel belong on my list of favorites.
It's very well written.
It deserve 10/10
The things I can think of that's not perfect is a realism level that's not at the top, some typos and one thing that's not your fault at all, namely my preferences.
In the end I'd say it's a must read for most people in here, I think that the number of people that would be turned of by it is very, very, limited.
>>>>Thanks for your efforts :-) <<<<
Ps. By the way, just though of another fault ;-)
To short! :-P
Nah, honestly, I'd enjoy reading more and I like stories to be long (although it's not a requirement for a good story).
And one more thing I enjoyed about it, the fact that it was consensual although the 'reluctant' bit's where hot too ^^
PPS. Hum.. just noticed some things that you might want to have a look at..
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/code_explain.php
I'd say it's 'serious' not 'heavy' although that's rather subjective..
You should add 'M+/f', 'M/f+' and 'M+/F+' since there's more then one male and more then one woman involved.
The sisters involvement is too brief for 'F/f' though..
The story should probably also have a 'teen' tag I think..
And since you both have 'B/D' and 'S/M' and I think you could probably add in 'D/s' in the story meaning that you might as well throw in 'BDSM' and have it all. Still, it's not the domination that's playing the biggest part in the story..
The 'consensual' tag should also be added.
And 'reluctant' is probably in it's place..
I guess the guy with the rather big.. genitals.. don't really qualify for the 'size' tag.. still..
Oh, and off course, 'humiliation' could be considered although the humiliation level don't seam to be all that high.. (compared to some stories)
All in all, there's a ton of possible tags for this story and although there's some variation in how much they play a part of the story they should at least be considered for your future stories ;-)
Although I think you've probably already done that.. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
master2slavesny
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Jun 4, 2006 |
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Excellent Story and enjoyed every bit of it (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
BoabhanSith
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Mar 22, 2006 |
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I was overly impressed with this story. One day I hope to be in Jane's shoes----and was sent over the edge when she and Chuck had that little talk in the car----That's how I always dream of losing my virginity!!---This author did an excellent job of giving description and letting everyone know what she wanted to be protrayed----The plot twists kept me on the verge the whole story---over all it is a very well writen peice of work! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Oct 8, 2005 |
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Intersting characters. Good plot twists. My young sub gf(38) loved it. She wants sequal with more public exh and huml. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Nov 20, 2002 |
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Jesus H Motherfucker. This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It is just Fucking surreal. The writing is EXCELLENT, and the story is fun. I especially like Jane, and how she and Chuck fell in love. Jane's father was cool too. Awesome story. It's so nice to read on that has good writing skills incorporated. Excellent work. (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Nov 15, 2002 |
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They don't get much better than this folks. This jaded reader and writer found this story very arousing. Sexy encounters, crisp and nasty Viddlerian dialogue, and a couple of very seductive 'heroines'.
I don't believe that I have given a 'consensual' story with a lot of sexual violence a '10' before, but this one deserves it despite the rather dubious premise.
A very fine effort by a most capable author. (10/10)
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