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Tripping The Line
Author: Aylith
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(Added on Oct 21, 2000)
(This month 8932 readers) (Total 18460 readers) |
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A story about a submissive female finding her submission. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Axel |
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Apr 5, 2001 |
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I find it quite erotic but the mass of typos is kinda irritating. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Oct 25, 2000 |
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Nothing new here. It's almost as if this is some kind of writers' school exercise. If so you get a C minus (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
L. M. |
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Oct 24, 2000 |
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This story has potential but in its current state is kinda dull. It appeared to me that she is trying to remeber and encounter although I am not for sure on this. The story did not seem as descriptive as i expected. As Always send me an email if you want! x00783@yahoo.com
L. M. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Painfully_Yours |
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Oct 21, 2000 |
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This just doesn'tdo it for me. its a whole lotta nothing. (3/10)
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