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The Ultimate
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on Nov 4, 2002)
(This month 51200 readers) (Total 65522 readers) |
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The conclusion in the Irena/Renee/slave6 tale. Earlier episodes already archived at this site. In this final chapter, the two are crucified at the hands of the Ultimates. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Nov 7, 2002 |
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Good, but I struggled to comprehend what was going on at times. If this is just a chapter in a story, I don't understand why it is presented as a standalone story.
Despite my agnostic views I still found the crucifixion disturbing, almost upsetting, although admittedly there was a degree of eroticism in this story. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Nov 8, 2002)
- Dear Equalizer,
Thank you for your generous review. I am glad that you not only enjoyed most of the piece, but also took the time to post your message.
From your words, however, it seems as though you somehow did not read the disclaimer which stressed that this was a conclusion, and not a "standalone" sic. The disclaimer also mentioned other parts of the same story archived on these pages. It also cautioned against those who might be offended by certain themes expressed in the story.
Despite your reservations your review is appreciated, and when it is convenient you might try reading earlier passages, solely for your enjoyment.
- Replied by:
Equalizer
(Edit) (Nov 9, 2002)
- Hi Faibhar. I did read the disclaimer and indeed have read and enjoyed many of your other stories on the same subject. I tried to give a straight and honest reaction to what I read, hopefully without causing offense.
- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Nov 14, 2002)
- Dear Equalizer,
How could one take 'offense' from such a generous reader? It just seemed from your earlier reviewthat the preface/disclaimer had been missed. Glad you have enjoyed the other writings.
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