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The Dream
Author: Kelly W.
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(Added on Nov 2, 2002)
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A young woman who has to deal with a freind of her older brother after being caught "acting up" at a nightclub. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Oct 7, 2003 |
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I agree with Marcus but believe that this little bit of atmospheric fiction rates a very good. I agree that it seems to be the work of a novice who show definite talent. A bit disappointed not to have seen any further fiction from this author on this site since this was written. I think that this writer has a talent for the dark side. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marcus
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Nov 3, 2002 |
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A reasonable effort, conjuring up some atmosphere. The author is obviously literate and makes a good attempt, but I suspect she is a novice at this style of writing. Some of the phrasing was stilted and awkward (possibly over- ambitious!) yet at other times quite strong and generally enjoyable.
(6/10)
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