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One Hot Day
Author: sweet_one
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(Added on Oct 30, 2002)
(This month 47538 readers) (Total 52154 readers) |
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A story about a master and his slut... enjoying a nice summer day. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 9, 2003 |
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This story is OK but I don't like the "you and I" style of story telling. Some assistance from the spelling/grammar checker might have helped too. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Nov 1, 2002 |
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So THAT'S why they call it those guys Good Humor men... (5/10)
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