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I Want You...
Author: icechic
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(Added on Oct 22, 2002)
(This month 9660 readers) (Total 23957 readers) |
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My pet is locked away in a chastity belt and teased mercilessly as I recount cumming again and again, making him suffer with the endless torment of continued denial and extreme restrained lust. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 7, 2005 |
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terrible, that says it all (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 19, 2003 |
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There really isn't anything in this remarkably short piece. The reader has no introduction to the characters; the ideas are not well structured or presented; none of the ideas are especially innovative; and it fails to create the sexual tension that should be so apparent in a story of this kind. Disappointing. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
masostud
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Jan 26, 2003 |
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Too short, some common ideas, but another author could make a better story out of it. (4/10)
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