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Joan's Other Life Author: Paladin
(Added on Oct 13, 2000) (This month 128589 readers) (Total 168665 readers)
The lonely woman was seeking a real man. What she found was a real master and she started a brand new life.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: JimmyJump (Edit) Rating: Feb 5, 2009
Before the start of the story, it says 'revised' next to the title, but I wonder what iliterate tit did the revision, as there's more silly spelling errors in this tale than there are stones in the pyramid of Cheops. 'Seen' instead of 'Scene', 'Boarded' instead of 'Bored', 'Wade' instead of 'Wad', 'Shinny' instead of 'Shiny', 'Mystic' instead of 'Mysticism', with 7 comma's missing... and this is after only 3 paragraphs.
A good thing I usually don't detract points for this kind of foolishness, or would have had to hand-out a meager three.
Okay, the story was a great read, with Joan being a delicious subject, but the tale is in dire need of a re-revision.
JJ (9/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 19, 2009
one of your best (9/10)

Reviewer: nikita (Edit) Rating: Aug 2, 2005
This is one of my favorite Paladin stories. I have read it several times with vibrator in hand...Loved it!
My two favorite characters in this story are Don and Brutus...Joan is just a foil for them. The visual descriptions were very good, especially Don's physical description and Joan's clit piercings. The only reason I didn't give it a 10 was it could have been proofread more carefully for spelling errors and run on sentences. But it was so good, I just kept reading it. (9/10)

Reviewer: vdsergik (Edit) Rating: Jan 15, 2004
Step by step from woman to slavegirl, great story! (10/10)

Reviewer: The Searcher Rating: Jan 17, 2001
This is one of my favorites. I searched for years to find it after alt.sex.stories become unuseful. Now finally it's back. This story is about Joan a beautiful young girl who is looking for an adventure and is about getting the adventure of her life! Full of tough detail and never boring. The best scenes I remembered for years are Joan stretching her boobs for whipping; her gulping master's urine; master shoving 2 huge dildos on a strap all the way in her cunt and ass; Brutus, her neighbor's dog sniffing same dripping cunt on their way to the car, and master's humiliating remarks about her fucking around with dogs (Sure enough, Joan is fucking Brutus eventually.) Joan playing with her cunt jewlery while at work, the bitch going "MOO, MOO" when being fucked. And best of all, her strapping herself on her coffee-table ass up in the air and mouth and throat over a huge dildo mounted on the table, locking herself with a collar to the table and waiting for master to come home... (10/10)

Reviewer: Painfully_Yours Rating: Oct 18, 2000
Pretty good, but could use more variety. (8/10)

Reviewer: nephilim Rating: Oct 16, 2000
Great Story!!! Lots of degrading and abusive situations for the cunt Joan! I love the group scenes and the on-going drama of Don's ownership! (8/10)

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