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Bound And Tortured
Author: John Roper
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(Added on Oct 3, 2002)
(This month 15944 readers) (Total 37170 readers) |
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Lisa had been into bondage and discipline for several years, but had never really been fully satisfied, where the pain and pleasure aspects of her sensual addiction were concerned. A highly recommended expert soon quenched Lisa's uncommonly masochistic thirst, in a most uncommon way, assuring her that, whether she liked it or not, she was in for the wildest weekend of her perennially kinky life. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 15, 2005 |
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My only "complint" if you call it that is i wish the story had been non consensual aside from that a geart story well done (9/10)
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Sally J
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Mar 1, 2005 |
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DAMN, Man! I swear you read my mind with this one! Have read it over and over and over and cum back for more! ;) (9/10)
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emmacd
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Jan 18, 2005 |
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Having had a few experiences of being bound to trees and left alone. I can say that it is a freighting experience not knowing that whether the peron will come back? You are at the descretion of what the person wishes to do with you. My experiences were that it can be quite a bit humiliating. Emmacd (9/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Oct 12, 2002 |
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I thought the author showed good imagination, but the story needs more attention to diction, syntax, and spelling. Here, for instance, are two sentences from the beginning of the story:
"Though barely into her twenties, she's
hardly what one would call a novice where bondage and discipline are concerned, having experienced her first inescapable fix at the ripe old age of seven, when cousin Anita tied her to a tree in the thick strip of woodland that separated
back yards from the ones opposite hers. The ropes were not all that tight, but well tied by her older playmate, giving Lisa a major first taste of what it's like to be bound and held fast to nature's sometimes unexpected surprises."
And that pattern of unwieldy sentences repeats itself throughout the story. 8 for imagination and energy, but only about a 4 for writing craftsmanship -- which I attribute more to haste, than to lack of ability. (The author professes to be a published writer)
I liked "Hempville, Long Island" though as the venue for a bondage story (there really is a "Hempstead") (5/10)
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Marcus
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Oct 7, 2002 |
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A reasonable start to what I assume will be a multi-part story. The writing style is good. However, it seemed too short for an opening chapter. I think more should have been written and developed to grab the 'busy' reader's attention. (6/10)
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