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Kathy's Story
Author: Ashley
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(Added on Sep 27, 2002)
(This month 43826 readers) (Total 91604 readers) |
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Kathy finds out that being a slave is much harder than fantasizing about it online, learning her new place involves a lot of pain and humiliation. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 30, 2005 |
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Tough training. Well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
kaleun76
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Sep 30, 2002 |
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I hope there is more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Equalizer
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Sep 29, 2002 |
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A stimulating tale. Poor Kathy is really getting the biker-slave treatment. Even though Kathy is the narrator of the story I'm still trying to understand what she makes of her plight. Hope you continue and give us more about how or what she is feeling. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Sep 28, 2002 |
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Good intensity, good diction, but not the 'biker slave' theme is not very original. The story would read much more easily if some of the long paragraphs were broken up into more manageable proportions.
Ashley got Indiana about right, though!
(6/10)
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