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The Tour
Author: Traveler
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(Added on Oct 4, 2000)
(This month 95926 readers) (Total 123478 readers) |
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Master and his slave went to a slave house and had a pleasant trip around the house and enjoyed the service provided by slavegirls. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Sam |
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Dec 25, 2000 |
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Not very interesting. i am disappointed. (2/10)
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Nel |
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Nov 24, 2000 |
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Not really that impressed or excited. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
noman |
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Oct 19, 2000 |
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Poor grammer, punctuation, and a hackneyed story line. No characterization to speak of. This is typical of a lot of crap on the net. Just an ugly scene. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
steve |
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Oct 12, 2000 |
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really enjoyed this lite bondage sex slave story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Norcalguy |
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Oct 11, 2000 |
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Solid, realistic and believable short story. Mechanics (spelling, etc.) need some work.
A simple, enjoyable short read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
L. M. |
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Oct 8, 2000 |
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I have personaly read better work than this. I am not very impressed at all. Grammar, punctuation, weak plot devolopment, and poor character devolopment. This appears like it should still be in the first stages of devolpment and not been publicly released yet. The story does have potential that is waiting to be unlocked. Email me if you want to! Louis (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
painfully_yours |
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Oct 4, 2000 |
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I liked this but really wish it was complete rather than just a start. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Boris |
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Oct 4, 2000 |
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Not a _bad_ start, let's see some more to decide... (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Oct 4, 2000 |
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Been there, read that! So please tell me what is so original about the beginning of this epic? Major deduction for the distracting grammar and horrible punctuation. The idea of a fifty year old slave is about the only novelty this story has to offer, and from the looks of things we will not be treated to any more of her travails. (5/10)
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