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Carol's Romance Author: Paladin
(Added on Sep 20, 2002) (This month 93717 readers) (Total 114738 readers)
It's dangerous working at the perfume counter...

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Weighed Average (?): (4/10)
Average Rating: (3.5/10)
Highest Rating: (6/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

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Reviewer: tttttt (Edit) Rating: Oct 5, 2003
gave up after chapter one..describe her body and get us to know her first..u silly (1/10)

Reviewer: Marcus (Edit) Rating: Sep 29, 2002
On the whole I enjoyed it, although the general standard waned as it went on. The main character's 'voice' and his unredeemable amoral attitude add a distinctive flavour to the story. It could be much improved by more care in the editing, but I wouldn't be the first to tell the author this! BTW, The italics mentioned in the other review were caused by the author's inadvertent use of a < > instead of parenthesis, which switched the browser to italics mode. (6/10)

Reviewer: veru_skjava (Edit) Rating: Sep 21, 2002
Wow, what a disappointment. The author needs to do some serious proofreading, lesion instead of lesson, is only one of a multitude of correctly spelled incorrect words. The story premise is good, the style is enjoyable, the distractions such as the switch to italics in the end of every chapter needs to be addressed.
I continued to chapter 4, before giving up. If it is edited and resubmitted I will gladly revisit and review again, as I usually find this authors stories quite enjoyable.
Rated three because the distractions deter from the good story potential. (3/10)

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