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The Torture of Princess Emily
Author: Baer-chen
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(Added on Sep 29, 2000)
(This month 63433 readers) (Total 95476 readers) |
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A young princess is captured by an invading enemy and brought to the depths of their dungeons. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
texancharm{E.C.Holland}
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Aug 19, 2008 |
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Uhm...oi! While not my cup of tea, you have some skill as an author, with minor mistakes that could be easily fixed by any competent editor. The story was....violent...to say the least, but i read it all the way through. (5/10)
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Mothbrad
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Feb 27, 2008 |
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A very sexy, pleasent story, not to mention many years old. Baer-chen went on to much bigger and better things, but this is still a cockraiser. (7/10)
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laursie
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Feb 6, 2006 |
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well this was very disturbing to say the least. I did keep reading. Not sure I like myself for it. Kind of like looking at the aftermath of a horrific car crash. You just cant help but keep looking even though you know you should look away. (6/10)
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Neopadinski
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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*ahem*
Um...ok...this story...it...it kind of disturbed me...
Yes, that pretty much sums up my reaction. Extremely violent, very disgusting at times (though I did love that "After we are done fucking you, we will begin hurting!" line, that was classic). But, it was fairly well written, and the final...um...event was something I certainly had never thought physically possible. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
WMassa
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Dec 14, 2001 |
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Plot and final highlights are nice - for the not too weak ones. What a pity we are missing parts 2 ... (should be bloodier and even more sophisticated, if the way part one ends counts). And don't forget to report about both mother and sisters ... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
baerchen
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Jul 27, 2001 |
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Guess this is cheating, but woudl you expect anything else? (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
B |
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Jan 27, 2001 |
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Poorly written. Hard to read. Unbelievable violence. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
engineer |
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Oct 7, 2000 |
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Very poor style and most times boring, sometimes ugly. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cramdon |
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Oct 4, 2000 |
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If you can manage to get past the grammatically erors and the way that teh story flows, this is not that bad. Author seems to be in teh first stages of this one but it will be interesting to see if he/she can bring it back together. Had some good parts and some bad ones. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
L.M. |
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Sep 30, 2000 |
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This was not a very good story. It did not flow or make much sense to me. Try again.... (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
hyphen 666 |
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Sep 29, 2000 |
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Not at all up the author's previous work! I found myself laughing at the dialogue provided to the villain, who is not only a boor, but boring as well. Loved the line " After we are done fucking you, we will begin hurting! ( I presume the ladies must have some sort of venereal disease. )I am not looking forward to any further installments of this turgid tale. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Baer-chen (Oct 17, 2000)
- This was actually my first attempt ever at this type of story, I just sent it late. Unfortunately I haven't finished it yetm but I assure you that it'll get better.
Baer-chen
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