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Susan's New Neighbor
Author: sig
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(Added on Sep 6, 2002)
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When her beautiful neighbor stepped between her and her boyfriend, Susan knew what she was needing. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
niftyfree
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Sep 28, 2005 |
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A great story, I can't believe I found it so late. Some typos, but the quality of the story still warrants a 10. (10/10)
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Yoru
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Dec 1, 2004 |
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I think it's not as good as "Luxury Suite", nonetheless it's clearly worth the 10. The atmosphere of the story is excellent. Hoping for more... (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 25, 2004 |
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i hope to see more like this in the future (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mskneeler
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Sep 11, 2002 |
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Good Lord; this is by far, one of the most thrilling and sensuous stories I have ever had the good fortune to read! I became so involved that I was mentally relishing the thoughts of my being in the place of either Anabelle or Victoria! If only reality could be thus! <sigh)
neenee (Janeen Marie O'Brien)
binkyboom@yahoo.com (10/10)
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Sep 7, 2002 |
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The idea for the story is great, but the writing needs a lot of work. Dialogue isn't written properly. Each paragraph has a number of mistakes that stop the flow of the reading. This author needs to improve his English or take more time to edit. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
sasha202
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Sep 6, 2002 |
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A very nice story that is a definate turn on. The only real distraction is the careless lack of editing by the author. If future chapters are cleaned up before submission, the story will be so much more readable.
The only puzzling aspect to this story is wondering why Susan would go to such lengths to punish Annabelle and Victoria when all they were doing was innocently flirting with men. Especially since it is obvious that Susan had no strong lesbian urges before taking Annabelle. It would all make sense if Susan secretly had strong lesbian urges and wanted Annabelle's submission or if she had caught Annabelle and Mark having sex. It seems that the punishment far outweighs the crime especially when the Domme is hetro and starts out as so demure, conservative, and reserved. (7/10)
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