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Souvenir
Author: Todd
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(Added on Sep 3, 2002)
(This month 13694 readers) (Total 34434 readers) |
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In an arabian country a girl is punished by a jealous wife. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
African
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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White adulte women circumcizion is an exciting subject... (7/10)
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ladys_maid
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May 17, 2003 |
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The story line is innovative and exciting but, as previous reviewers have noted, it is not detailed enough to bring the tale to life. I would have liked to have heard much more about the affair that lead to the punishment and the plotting that had obviously gone on to bring about Jessica's downfall. Spelling and grammar also need checking - there were several different spellings of the place name - Jeddah - and even the heroine's name (Jessica). A story with much unrealized promise, I do hope the writer revisits it - it could be great. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Sep 8, 2002 |
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A good central idea, and not badly written (save for one very long paragraph, and a lack of indentation which makes the story a little difficult to read). But unerotic, to this reader; and isn't that why we came to the dance? As Equalizer correctly states a better and longer story could be done around this interesting premise. (6/10)
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Equalizer
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Sep 4, 2002 |
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It makes a change to read something different, and this story qualifies. I think that the premise of the story is interesting enough that author could improve it by expanding the plot and the details.
In its current form the story is way too short. I hope the writer would consider revising it for a future posting. (7/10)
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